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    Tears of a dew drop

    Post by $~Dents% on Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:02 am

    I hope my tears do fallow into a river
    Creating more pain , more hearts that
    I should have turely left behind.
    Over and over again I have tired to dry them
    leaving only dew drop of my heart
    Is that I ahev no shame
    To let the other hold the power over me
    Or is that I have no power over myself.
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    Re: Tears of a dew drop

    Post by adderjx on Sun Jul 06, 2008 4:31 pm

    No Tears to Shed


    The tears have long since passed,
    I wish to cry I hurt so much inside,
    I stand so alone here now, frail and frightened,
    The demon inside wishing to take life from my weakened body,
    I want to cry so very bad, I scream out in this world so loud for help,
    But no one responds to me,
    I listen at dawn and stare around me and see the animals screaming as well,
    But unlike me they receive help and get a response,
    I fall too my knees weak and small as the sunrise gets blurry, turning into a raging fire,
    I fall down onto the ground and stop moving forever,
    My body found by none,
    My body dry and limp,
    Not one tear of pain I shed as I died

    sorry if im intruding
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    Re: Tears of a dew drop

    Post by Ichigos#1fan on Tue Jul 15, 2008 9:44 am

    All so sad. But yet beautiful. Bravo you guys
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    Re: Tears of a dew drop

    Post by adderjx on Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:11 am

    i shouldnt say anything i wanted to write a poem all summer just waiting was torcher but i saw his and used it to think of one myself and i was kinda dilusional at the time i hadnt slept for two days when i wrote it
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    Re: Tears of a dew drop

    Post by Moonlight15 on Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:12 am

    you should really write more. Poetry becomes you both.
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    Re: Tears of a dew drop

    Post by adderjx on Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:08 am

    really i just write it when it comes to me but most of it is sad
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    Re: Tears of a dew drop

    Post by $~Dents% on Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:42 am

    It's only sad to the beholder. Sorry for inturupting but just couldn't help.
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    Re: Tears of a dew drop

    Post by adderjx on Sat Jul 19, 2008 3:49 pm

    ur topic u can talk if u like and not really it hurts the beholder above all others yes but others can feel the pain from things as well and sometimes really close to the original pain sad happy or all poems are here for those to read and see things in the view of others
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    Re: Tears of a dew drop

    Post by Ichigos#1fan on Tue Jul 22, 2008 5:58 am

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